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“Women Coaching
Men”
by Darren Mooney
Essay Thesis and Organization
What is the impact of starting the essay with
the story from Canisius College?
What is the thesis? Since the thesis is not in
the first paragraph, how does the author build up to it?
Do the examples in the essay match the
conclusions in the overview sources and studies?
How does the author explain the results of some studies by reference to their
time periods?
List the examples from the essay in order. Why
did the author present the examples in this order?
How does the author integrate the personal
interview into the essay?
How does the author explain the current
situation for women coaching men? How does he justify his prediction for the
future?
Sources
Among the sources, how many are about specific
coaches, and how many are studies or overviews?
What does the author write for the annotations
of the sources?
Place the sources into categories: magazine
articles, journal sources, Web sources, interviews. How can the author trust
the Web sources that he chose?
Explain the designation “Path” that follows the
URL’s in some of the bibliographic entries for Web sites.
On the first page of the essay, some of the
citations have quotation marks inside. Why?
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